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Walls... by DanVishaykuArts Walls... by DanVishaykuArts
This was my shadow and cloth test on a surface actually.

If you see any part that may make you interested or disturbing, just don't mind about it. This sketch is actually inspired by kaikoinu on this one:
kaikoinu.deviantart.com/art/FL…







Available for editing, but credit me for using it. Do not take and claim this art as yours.
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Carlos-Marlon Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
How tf do you expect to grow as an artist if you straight-up condemn any "bad comments" about your art? Just, how? You can't stay in that bubble for the rest of your life, coddled, thinking you're content with your art being this way, thinking that your art's good. You have to accept criticisms, be they positive or negative. An artist's art is never good, it can only be better. (Unless you're a dead art master, I guess) You can't be an artist if you choose to ignore the things that are oviously wrong with your art. With that, Imma lay this down on you. Don't block me, don't mark this comment as spam, read. Read. I'm just helping you, because that thinking of yours is really unhealthy and crippling for artists. First of all, you've already acknowledged that there's "something disturbing" about this drawing you've made. Why, o why, did you choose not to make your art so it wouldn't be this way? It's not enough to say that "my art's shit, but that's how it is." You should strive to improve enough so it would be less shit. Second, I'm not even going to elaborate on the boobs. You know, you know. You absolutely know where you went wrong. Boob socks, cloth wrapping around them like they're vaccuum-sealed, the whole kazoo. It doesn't even end there. Her torso, it's broken. I don't know if that line there is her spine or just a mistake, but your art's so clean it can't possibly be the latter. It's not supposed to be there. And her face. Ah, her eyes are rectangular ffs! And they're set so low on her forehead! Her cheek just juts out from under her eyes. And her mouth doesn't look like anything I've ever seen before. Her ear is misplaced and looks like a cancerous lump. The cracks in the wall, they look like tree roots, concrete cracks are much much fewer in number. It's okay to take inspiration from other artists for your style but, please! At least pick artists who actually know what they're doing! Pick a good artist to base you style off of at the very least! Kaikoinu is a bad, bad artist. An artist should never, ever look at Kaikoinu's art and say "this is what i want to do." Other than the oversexualization of Kaikoinu's art, they also have a very skewed perception of anatomy. Here I am wondering where you went off the beaten path. Your previous devs where actually good, albeit with some minor anatomical mistakes. But this, this can't just be fixed, it's a mess! Learn from this please.
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kaikoinu Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so~~~longXD
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Carlos-Marlon Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, haha. Go ahead, paint me as a strawman, let's see where that gets you.
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DanVishaykuArts Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hey you know I can edit the description
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